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strange things page 6 by ~Micahra:iconMicahra:



Contains some violent content and implies of sexual content, please be 18 or older before you read. I will not be held responsible if anyone under 18 read this without a parent’s permission. Enjoy!





We returned to the house. I had only found three outfits that I liked as they were made. It was around seven in the evening. Drameen went strait to get dinner ready only stopping long enough to tell Tecnor to help me put my things away, then she was gone. I looked at Tecnor, who was waiting there with out a word. I turned and started for my room that I was given to use. Glancing over my shoulder, I saw Tecnor moving behind me. When he was done he turned to find me watching him. He gave me that weak smile again, “Did you need anything else my lady?”
I looked at him, “Come here.”
He obeyed. He stood there in front of me. I put out my hand and he took it slowly, unsure. “And what is this?”  Said a voice from by the door, we didn't even hear it open.
I looked over to the door. Askar stood leaning against the wall to the right of the door. I looked back at Tecnor. He was looking strait ahead. Askar walked over to us, putting a hand on Tecnor’s shoulder. Tecnor just stood there his hand in mine. Askar looked at our hands, “Do you want her Tecnor?”
Tecnor looked down at me, “I meant no dis…”
“Just answer my question.” Askar must have done something to Tecnor’s shoulder because he winced.
“Yes, my master. Please forgive me.”
Askar looked down at me. I gave him a glance before I looked down at the floor, removing my hand from Tecnor’s. He dropped his to his side. There was a fast movement and I looked up. All I saw was Tecnor falling toward me. I put up my hands in reaction, as Tecnor put his arms out to braces the fall. We ended with me laying on the bed whit my hand on Tecnor’s chest and looking up in his face, he was on top of me holding he upper body off of me with his arms on either side of my head. He was looking down at me with a scared look in his eyes. I glanced over his shoulder to Askar. Askar looked at me, “Tecnor, get up and get out.”
Tecnor got up immediately and with out a word or even a glance back he left. I started to sit up when Askar was suddenly right there. I went back to lying down on the bed. Askar moved into the same position that Tecnor was just in. Then he leaned into me, moving his face by my ear. His lips touched it ever so slightly, but it made me tighten up and try to move away from him. All he said was “Don’t.”
He placed a gentle kiss on my ear. He moved to my jaw line, kissing lightly down it. He come up to the lips, but hung there just above them. My hands were on his chest and I hadn’t remembered putting them there. He had a shirt on so I wasn’t touching bare skin, which was good because I didn’t know what would happen if I touched his bare skin. He gave me a gentle kiss to my lips and then gave me a cruel smile. He leaned back. I moved my hands away and turned my face to the side. He reached out and took my face in his hand, turning my to look at him.
“Watch.” He said simply.
He slowly removed his shirt. Watching him mad my body tighten and shudder underneath him. It made him smile cruelly. He leaned in, taking my hands in his. He put my hands on his chest, running them up over his nipples. He released my hands, but I couldn’t stop. I ran my hands over his muscular chest to his shoulders, as he leaned more into me. He kissed me, and this time I kissed back. He flicked his tongue over my lips and I opened for him. He explored my mouth as I explored his. I ran my hands down his back. Then he got up off me, “So, you do want me. Then I will let you have Tecnor as your slave.” With that he left.
©2007-2009 ~Micahra
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Author's Comments

well i tried to use the tips everyone has been giving me. I'm sorry if i didn't get them all right, it will take some time for me to do so. but here it is page 6. I'm sorry it is so short but i cant type anymore I'm trying not to fall asleep writing this. please enjoy.

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:iconreaver98:
i's gud but its full of really confusing typos u may wana sort out ^^

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:iconmicahra:
ill go back over it thank you.

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:iconnaruto944035:
Hmmmm....Not bad. lol, at least you experimented with the suggestions.

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:iconmicahra:
yeah, i just went back through it and i found my spelling problems in it and fix those. but the p thing you was talking about i couldnt find it.

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:iconreaver98:
^^ its still awsomely good though ^^

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:iconmicahra:
thank you

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:iconwhite-rabbitgirl:
Not bad dude also Ummmm I was curious does she like that vampire dude (askur?) or tucher? Cause one Askur is a bit of abustive and all? *is a bit confused that's all*

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:iconmicahra:
see thats the best part of it you wont know till i post more. but you will find out why Askar is so abusive and as for Tecnor well yes she likes him but i wont tell why till later on as well. sorry its taking so long for me to put up more but i will do so soon.

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It's cool

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